The class have produced some very imaginative personification poems. After reading some of them, they sent a chill down my back! They have really imagined what night would be like as a person. Here is a sample.
NIGHT
Night is a dark disguised creature,
Hidden by his billowing cape.
He cuts you with a chilling glare
Pulverizing all the light.
His clothes are made of dirty rags,
Dull eyes with a penetrating stare.
Face is sinister and boney,
And has hair as red as revenge.
Night takes away the clement weather,
Replacing it with raging storms.
When day comes Night has to retreat,
Running to someone else to haunt.
He moves at an amazing velocity,
But always creeps up from behind.
He takes refugee in victim’s homes,
And takes away all hope …
By Jamie 6L
2 comments:
A fantastic poem with exceptional vocabulary. Well done!
What a fantastic poem!!
Jamie has personified 'Night' so vividly that I found the poem quite frightening.
Mrs Gibb
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